TIPS FOR WRITING PERSONAL ESSAYS

DOs!

1. Individualize the essay
• Address only the question or topic requested
• Make reference to the program/scholarship in the essay
  
  
2. Write several drafts
• Get feedback on drafts from a trusted mentor/advisor
• Let pieces go that don't fit
• Keep to the word or page limit
  
  
3. Be creative
• Since everyone will be addressing a similar topic, be unique in presentation (tell a story; use poetry or other literary forms; be daring!)
  
  
4. Use an authentic voice
• Write in the first person--it's an essay about you
• Convey a sense of your self in the tone, language, and form
• Communicate your core values and talents concisely
• Show who you are, rather than tell what you've done
  
  
5. Proofread and edit your essay
• Do spell and grammar checks
• Have a trusted mentor review the essay
• Read the essay out loud for errors
• Correct all mistakes

DON'Ts!

• Give a laundry list of your accomplishments
• Write a "formula" essay (e.g. avoid "Why I want to be in the SURE Program" format)
• Use slang, jargon, cliches, or excessively elaborate prose
• Exceed the word or page limit
• Submit the same essay for multiple applications, merely substituting the names of the program for each one

See also, CU Office of Financial Aid advise for writing essays.