Using the Senses to Stimulate Brainstorming
From Writing Process Activities Kit by Mary Lou Brandvik
SIGHT
Using your sense of sight, finish the following lists:
Color:
Purple Gray Brown Green Red
Orchid ashen almond celery cherry
Grape pearl tan avocado ruby
Appearance: Movement: Shapes:
Dotted skip tubular
Cracked dash wavy
Ragged scurry rectangular
Frayed lumber crooked
Hollow shuffle tapering
1. Write the following words on the board: a shoe, a leaf, bread, the sidewalk.
2. Explain that each is something that they might see every day. Ask student to choose one object, close their eyes and visualize a specific picture in their minds, and, finally, write several sentences, using the sense of sight, to create a picture that will be seen by the reader. Fore example, a piece of soap becomes "a gold bar of DIAL, oval and cracked. The letters look like an old tombstone inscription. It has fallen from the sink and rests in the cobwebs and sand behind the wastebasket.
3. Encourage students to use original detail. For example, the description of the bar of soap is so particular that it could have existed only in that exact moment in that very place.
HEARING
List 10 sounds you would like to hear or 10 you wouldnít like to hear.
Topics: a pep rally, a hospital waiting room, an amusement park
Add more words to each category.
Loud Soft Speech
Crash buzz drawl
Thud snap murmur
Screech tinkle stammer
TOUCH
Topics: a pieced of cotton, a blanket, an ice cube, a sunburn.
Add more words
Cool, scalding, sticky, damp, slippery, waxy, rubbery, velvety, fuzzy
TASTE AND SMELL
What is your favorite food? What tastes do you dislike? What are some different kinds of stores; describe how they smell. Can you think of a memory associated with a smell?
Topics: a blade of grass, a fire, a lemon drop, a piece of toast
Add more words
Taste: Oily, bitter, bland, peppery, sugary, raw, bitter, sweet,
Smell: fragrant, spicy, burnt, putrid, moldy, rancid, minty, fishy, sour
Keep copies of all your brainstormings so that you can use them later in the semester to help the student to write more interesting sentences and paragraphs.